Arne makes sense to me, given your story. I'm warming towards 23 - like the culottes. Not totally sold on the hair-style, though I think the gold looks rich against the grey outfit. Her outfit needs more detailing - I can imagine patterns like this working across the shoulders and maybe down the back:
(I can help thinking that Mia Farrow as depicted here is Arne in so much as she's beautiful and boyish at the same time - I think the freckles would be nice touch too).
Feels like her boots need more work - and that they shouldn't be the same colour as her 'cloak' - some things to try?
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/fa/2c/51/fa2c51d4283f148ee08db184222230bf.jpg https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/af/b3/c4/afb3c4b60af57d8f78dbe2b2b02973cd.jpg https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/2f/1d/86/2f1d865c7617e60c0a54d80ef511443d.jpg (chunky long socks above Scandi brown boots with red laces?) https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/a9/26/df/a926df7ba2b2599cd9367d22ef12b339.jpg
also - just thinking about your title - I don't think your title captures what your film is actually about, which is actually about where 'Home' is -
Just 'Home' might be nice - or the Swedish translation 'Hem' - anyway not 'to the sky' at least, because that's the opposite of your film's theme. What do you think?
Arne makes sense to me, given your story. I'm warming towards 23 - like the culottes. Not totally sold on the hair-style, though I think the gold looks rich against the grey outfit. Her outfit needs more detailing - I can imagine patterns like this working across the shoulders and maybe down the back:
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I think giving her nice deep pockets on her culottes will add interest too.
In terms of her hair - about a touch of the Mia Farrow?
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/0e/e4/a0/0ee4a0e465e3b13c5c34483cea68302c.jpg
(I can help thinking that Mia Farrow as depicted here is Arne in so much as she's beautiful and boyish at the same time - I think the freckles would be nice touch too).
Feels like her boots need more work - and that they shouldn't be the same colour as her 'cloak' -
some things to try?
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/fa/2c/51/fa2c51d4283f148ee08db184222230bf.jpg
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/af/b3/c4/afb3c4b60af57d8f78dbe2b2b02973cd.jpg
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/2f/1d/86/2f1d865c7617e60c0a54d80ef511443d.jpg (chunky long socks above Scandi brown boots with red laces?)
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/a9/26/df/a926df7ba2b2599cd9367d22ef12b339.jpg
also - just thinking about your title - I don't think your title captures what your film is actually about, which is actually about where 'Home' is -
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I like the idea of the Swedish translation, Hem it is!
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